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questioning the thought by ~luciusreaper:iconluciusreaper:



just to question, thats all i ask,
just to answer, for you to bask.
your glory ending, its time for my begining.
your friendship sways in the sky so low,
daring to crash on the rocks below.
not your fault, or mine.
but a combination indivine.
you have changed,
i have wondered,
the last words ever pondered....
why are you so agressive?
agressive to the others,
not me.... you dont even see me.
but ill make you see, make you think, make you question.
its not about me, its not about you...
its about whats right and how to do.
you will see, its not the others that have changed...
i have changed but for the better, and you have changed....

i used to question, 'why wont you love me?'
but now i question, 'why would i have ever cared?'
cared for a person, who drops them like flies.
ones so close, now just lies.....

you say daily you give up. but you never do,
you continue your sight for attention. and you get it too
but its the guilt of it all that sights for you....

i used to be the questioner, but now i am the answer.
you ask ill answer, but at a cost.... for every question you ask,
weather spoken or not, will force you a word of your concience,
for once to listen to such a thing, thats your price of ignorance.
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for one who thinks he has stayed the same, and others changed. he is cursed to take the blame. but is it wrongly given or rightly so? its not your choice, or mine. but his to devine

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:iconhanakiwi11:
I like this one a lot. There is a lot of raw emotion in it. ^^ I'd rework a part here or there, and fix the spelling/grammer/capitalization/etc. Good strong core of a piece here. Are they lyrics?

:rose:

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For every person that you meet - for every one that influenced you, hurt you, or loved you - they have left footprints on your heart.
- Myself; M.A.Edwards
:iconluciusreaper:
not supposed to be lyrics but they could be XD

ya i need to work on my spelling punctuation and capitilization....

i might have made a few gramatical errors but there are sertain ones there on purpose to give more strength to the words.


i intend to create a new style of poetry! a combinational piece of different rhyme schemes and rythems... and yet it all flows so smoothly...

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cat! im a kittie cat! and i dance dance dance...

i dont want to be a chicken, i dont want to be a duck... all i want to do is F*UCK F*CK F*CK

i found this kitty cat and in someones signature and i love it!!!!
 /l、
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:iconhanakiwi11:
LOL, okay. Cool. 'sertain'? Nice. XDD

:rose:

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For every person that you meet - for every one that influenced you, hurt you, or loved you - they have left footprints on your heart.
- Myself; M.A.Edwards
:iconilovedemyx:
Let me guess, you were bored were'nt you? LOLZ I like it *saves to favorites*

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If you can't dazzle them with brilliance, baffle them with bullshit

I believe in JESUS CHRIST, the son of the living GOD

German: The other white meat

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